Monday, September 26, 2011

BEFORE I DIE

before i die i want to tell bubba that i will always be there for him i want to let poncho know that he is the best brother anyone could wish for i want to tell skyler to shape up but that i will always love him i want to tell mom that she doesnt need someone else to complete her i want to tell dad that he needs to grow a pair i want to tell mae that she needs to be human i want to tell buttercup that she is everthing she needs to be i want to tell ofwea that she is special i want to tell everyone in my life that they had a part in making me who i am today before i die i want to fulfill all of my wishes when i am dead i want to stay on earth and do everything i never got the chance to do
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5 comments:

  1. d bowieSeptember 27, 2011 at 7:42 AM

    I really liked the format you did this in! Loved the whole thing:)

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  2. Lindsi Rae BurrSeptember 27, 2011 at 7:47 AM

    I like this a lot. It is really personal. I love the very ending line. It's full of disappointment and regret, sad yet wicked good.

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  3. apricots in one basketSeptember 27, 2011 at 8:00 AM

    I like how you chose to say what you truly wanted them to know. good work

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  4. Tobias Hogarth ManlySeptember 27, 2011 at 8:02 AM

    I'd want to stay on the earth again too. Wicked good writing.

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  5. what's her nameSeptember 27, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    i love this.

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